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Wednesday, June 10, 2009

自创曲 she said

上次有把自创曲post上来
很多人听了都有给comment
有些人讲难听lo
有些人讲还ok lo
有些人就讲不错听

不管你们讲好还是讲不好
对我来说我是觉得还好
反正我只是发表自己创作罢了
所以对我来说开心就好
haha

这次
我就决定
做一首英文歌
但是
我的英文是有限公司
所以
我最多只能想到一点点字罢了

所以hor
就决定叫Mr chuo ying 来写歌词lo
然后我就作曲
之后再来改一下
然后我们就来合唱lo

之后我们还有做另外一首歌的
不过实在是有待加强
(虽然我觉得chorus不错听啦)
不过我们还没讨论好要怎样唱
所以就收起来不要发表啦

因此我们就只post she said 这首歌
希望给多一点意见啦

要听的话就按旁边
我把一个player放在那边

然后要download的话
就按这个link

http://www.badongo.com/file/15390777


有comment可以跟我讲

或跟chuo ying 讲

这是他的blog

不过他好像很久没update了


She said


作曲:wind

作词:chuo ying

合唱



Sitting on the silver shore

Feeling the breezes touching her hair

The sound of the ocean waves

Beatin the love inside our hearts


Watching on the silver screen

Sadness starts flowing inside of me

Why did she leave me

Why did she leave me all alone


She said

She just wanna be me my best friend

She said

I just only can be her best friend

My heart broken to pieces

And I don’t know what to do

Yes I felt so lonely without you


Under the starry night

I see moonlight dancing in her eyes

Glamorous her eyes were

Alluring my little feeble soul


Rain pouring down in the evening

Sorrow engulfs my chilled body

Why did she hurt me

Why did she break our little promise


She said

She just wanna be my best friend

She said

I just only can be her best friend

My heart broken to pieces

And I don’t know what to do

Yes I felt so lonely without you

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

i got try click the player but no response lo...

nvm, i think it is not bad de,

cuz u 2 is i agree de king for karaoke in 5s7.

gambatee ya,
when go back i hope can listen tiok live de.


i at here got some ppl present guitar too...

the guitar de sound touch tiok my heart ad.

Anonymous said...

actually hor...
i duno how download wid tis new laptop.

i got url n xun lei, but u give me the url how should i dl it?

u kno?

R said...

Honestly..what did I feel when I first heard it?I felt well..like moving along to the song.It had a jazzy loose feel..relaxed in some way..I would describe it like as if I was at the beach, and I heard 2 dorky guys singing this song..#Chuckles in evil way#..ahaha.It had a nice feel and beat to it..heh.

Laruちゃん

Anonymous said...

omg!!!!
my idol my idol ...wohooooo


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